lol aight what ludocris is trying to say.. You need to record your video in front of you(gotta face the cam) cuz that way we can see the moves better. anyway imo it was nice the beatriding was here.
Also i'd say you look too... tight.... i mean.. ou focus wayyyy too much on yo walk. U should be completly smooth cuz i dunno didnt look like u felt the walk... but yo that was good.. no lie i like it
also u shuld fnd a better spot to record your videos like i dunno a wall with tagz on it stuff like that :P.
Anyway buddy KEEP IT UP u'll kill it pretty soon. u already kick ass